「 ♔ * ・゚— PROPHET 」 writing dump
#21
i love parks

if it helps at all lynn only coop n kk have real arcs and development
99% of my beans are way underdeveloped


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#22
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lol i just want to come up w/ something interesting for her without spoiling too much
& her personality is just so damn complex for me idfk what to do

she's a mess
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#23
boi i know that feel omg
most of my chars are hella underdeveloped
but i have this one char who's pretty developed but at the same time he's too frickin complex and it's so ?? ? y'know

but anyway i love parks and i always thought she was a really well-developed, complex character, which is something i've always loved about her (': good luck with coming up with something!! writing is hard lol


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ahhh
thank you marsy <3
writing is hard, indeed haha
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* ・゚ ✦ —  ❝ my lord, i ———————— spoke to a baphomet
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—————— HE SAID HE WOULD SAVE ME IF I GAVE YOU ONE THING YOU NEEDED. " WHAT IS THIS THING? " I PLEADED. ❝ BOY, IT'S THE KEY TO EVEN. ❞ AS I SPOKE, MY FANGS WERE SHOWN. TAKEN ABACK, HE SMILES, ❝ WHAT YOU CRAVE WILL SOON BE YOURS, BUT WHAT I CRAVE, IS ALREADY MINE. ❞ ANIMA VESTRA —————————————————————————————————     
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* ・゚ ✦ —  ❝ i gotta go ————————  i'm sorry, i gotta go
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—————— BUT THESE WORDS LOSE THEIR MEANING, 'CAUSE I JUST KEEP REPEATING THEM LIKE THAT'LL MAKE THEM COME ALIVE. THEY'RE ONLY WORDS AND YOU KNOW IT. YOU'VE ALWAYS KNOWN BETTER THAN I DO. AND IT FEELS LIKE I KNOW NOTHING BUT ENVY. MAYBE IF I JUST HAD MORE PATIENCE, I WOULD BE SO FAR FROM HERE ————————————————   

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* ・゚ ✦ —  ❝ you try to kill it ————   but it won't stop bleeding
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—————— YOU TRY TO FORGET IT, BUT IT WON'T STOP KILLING YOU. YOU'RE RUNNING OUT OF TIME. YOU KNOW YOU CAN'T GO BACK; IT'S TOO LATE TO SAY IT'S TOO LATE. YOU CAN'T TAKE BACK YOU SAID NOTHING. HOW COULD YOU DO NOTHING? IS THIS BURNING RIGHT? AM I LIVING BRIDGES? CAN WE BUILD OUR PAST RIGHT, LEARNING THROUGH FUTURE SOLECISM —————— 

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* ・゚ ✦ —  ❝ out of love ——————— we talk through lines
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—————— WE'RE MADE OF SMOKE, AND JUST IN TIME, WE DRIFT AWAY; DIFFUSING LIGHT, CONFUSING TIMES. GROWING UP OR CASCADING DOWN... CASCADING DOWN. I'M HURTING NOW. BUT CHANGE COMES SLOW; IF YOU HATE WHAT'S IN YOUR HEAD, THE FUCK WOULD YOU SPEAK YOUR MIND? IN SEARCH OF LOST TIME. JUST TWENTY-ONE SO I'M YOUNG AND I'M STUPID; ONLY SIXTEEN AND I THINK YOU SHOULD'VE KNOWN. I THINK YOU FUCKED ME UP. I THINK, I THINK YOU FUCKED ME UP. AND I GOT NOTHING TO SAY TO YOU  


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* ・゚ ✦ —  ❝ oh, i know —— i can feel the shifting in my bones
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—————— ENCLOSED ARE SENSES SO UNKNOWN. I'VE BEEN CHANGING, FALLINGFADING. THERE'S DEMONS AT THE DOOR, PATIENTLY WAITING. BUT I WASN'T COMPOSED OF BROKEN BONES OR DEMON LIMBS. SO PLEASE WATCH OVER ME, AND BE THE LIGHT TO CARRY ME —————————————————
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* ・゚ ✦ —  ❝ this world —————————— is a masterpiece
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—————— A CANVAS SHEET ACCOUNTABLE FOR SUCH LOSSES. SHOUT OUT TO THE ARTIST WHO TOOK HIS HEART AND HIS SOUL AND LOST THEM BOTH IN THE PROCESS. IF IT GETS HOLD OF ME, PLEASE BE THE SAINT TO SAVE ME. SO PLEASE WATCH OVER ME, AND BE THE LIGHT TO CARRY ME ———————
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* ・゚ ✦ —  ❝ gemini, ———— won't you meet me eye to eye? ❞
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—————— I'VE BEEN WONDERING WHY YOU KEEP FEEDING ME THESE LINES. AND YOU MADE A FOOL OF ME. YEAH, YOU MADE A FOOL OF ME AS YOU SANG ME SWEET. YOU CHARM ME, IT'S NOT EASY. YOU WOULD NOT BELIEVE HOW THE TIDES HAVE TURNED. YOU THINK I, I WOULD HAVE LEARNED THIS BY NOW. BUT, IF I'M GONNA PLAY YOUR GAMES, I KNOW THERE'S A PRICE TO PAY. I GOT THE TENDENCY TO CONSTANTLY PAY FOR MY MISTAKES ————————————————————————————————— 
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#26
trackkk i love your writing and character development!


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#27
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ahhhhh thank you! :,)
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#28
(01-10-2018, 04:30 PM)demesne link Wrote: i love your writing and character development!


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threads that need to be made / to-do list

finding / playing guitar
finding a cat and naming it beef-tip
start on a one-shot for the upcoming february contest, so i don't procrastinate when the time actually comes to get started
finish parks' upcoming character development thread
finish the one-shot


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#30
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uhh let's see...
eventually parks will come to care about the badfam ( even sheo, who she fucking hates ). maybe after the whole mental breakdown ordeal. she finally comes to realize that being alone absolutely fucking sucks & that she actually needs to start trusting people if she wants to be a better person even if that means setting aside her pride for the time being. sure, she won't openly admit that she cares about them, but it's there. for the first time, she has a family and she doesn't want to lose that.
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