09-04-2020, 09:29 PM
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[member=570]scully[/member] Oh gOD I'm crying GFHJL Joey, Seb and William; whoever tags along with them for that trip would be dying by the end of the trip GHFJKL
As for Bowie... this is going to be so exciting. Adorable for Maxen, angsty for Maxie, and BEEF BEEF BEEF for ass pen & edit HJKL but I like the idea of him helping Eddie and that only creating tension and a dislike of each other. We should totally plot something for them!!
Bowie and Green though omg!! Green is going to love Bowie; new iconic friendship?? I think so, especially since Bowie is an absolute daredevil, just like Green. They need to be friends because who else will encourage each other to do stupidly reckless things in the name of fun??
Also oH I TOTALLY FORGOT THAT BUT I AGREE 100%. Eddie knowing it was Elijah, but in order to protect his and Joey's identity he claims it was someone in BP who killed Aiden!!
@Hoot You already know how I feel about what you pointed out and I 100% agree! The last thing we would like to do is to make this plot feel exclusive when it was intended to be quite the opposite! No one will be assigned particular roles in which no one else is allowed to join in on said roles. Everyone's characters are welcome in any role which gives them muse and inspiration.
But yes! As for your ideas? I love them?? Firstly, my biggest pet peeve is when the protagonist always has the upper hand. There should be times where FL makes a mistake and fumbles. There should be times where FL does something questionable which makes BP seem like the good guys (after all, BP may be an antagonistic group but we must remember they aren't bad for the sake of being bad; they have genuine reasons for doing this). I do know that the trigger for BP's hostility directly towards FL is because of a mistake on FL's part!
I love the idea of morals being questioned! It is so interesting to see how writers can stretch and break their characters when a stressful situation happens. I mean currently I know that BP does this in order to feel safe in knowing they can look after one another, but perhaps something happens where BP then needs those supplies and FL would be almost cruel to deny them it?? But also the morals of individuals being questioned. People who wouldn't hurt a fly now being thrust into conflict, people who wouldn't harm a woman know having to do so to protect their own? The options are limitless.
Also, currently FL wants to stop BP as BP's actions directly impact FL! FL is the closest large group to BP so the victims of BP's crimes come to FL seeking help or stealing in order to survive, and it's draining FL's own supplies! It would be really interesting thinking of something FL could also gain out of winning?
I really like that though and I agree! Sometimes it's far more realistic when both parties essentially lose. Fights like these are not so clear cut; there rarely is an apparent winner and loser as everyone loses enough to be deemed losers ya know? it would be mad depressing if both groups were worse off after the fight.
I really love those ideas though fr!
@Everyone So, I'm thinking we should get the ball rolling with this plot sooner rather than later. It's a long term plot so we can develop along the way once we've got a feel for it! Tomorrow, I will write up a quick summary of what we've discussed so far so that we can see whether people think that it's a plot that they're happy with! I'll be posting the summary here so... Keep your eyes peeled for it.
And, after what Hoot pointed out, I think in the meantime it would be interesting to hear feedback from you guys:
Who should win? FL? BP? Or should it be not so clear who won?
[member=570]scully[/member] Oh gOD I'm crying GFHJL Joey, Seb and William; whoever tags along with them for that trip would be dying by the end of the trip GHFJKL
As for Bowie... this is going to be so exciting. Adorable for Maxen, angsty for Maxie, and BEEF BEEF BEEF for ass pen & edit HJKL but I like the idea of him helping Eddie and that only creating tension and a dislike of each other. We should totally plot something for them!!
Bowie and Green though omg!! Green is going to love Bowie; new iconic friendship?? I think so, especially since Bowie is an absolute daredevil, just like Green. They need to be friends because who else will encourage each other to do stupidly reckless things in the name of fun??
Also oH I TOTALLY FORGOT THAT BUT I AGREE 100%. Eddie knowing it was Elijah, but in order to protect his and Joey's identity he claims it was someone in BP who killed Aiden!!
@Hoot You already know how I feel about what you pointed out and I 100% agree! The last thing we would like to do is to make this plot feel exclusive when it was intended to be quite the opposite! No one will be assigned particular roles in which no one else is allowed to join in on said roles. Everyone's characters are welcome in any role which gives them muse and inspiration.
But yes! As for your ideas? I love them?? Firstly, my biggest pet peeve is when the protagonist always has the upper hand. There should be times where FL makes a mistake and fumbles. There should be times where FL does something questionable which makes BP seem like the good guys (after all, BP may be an antagonistic group but we must remember they aren't bad for the sake of being bad; they have genuine reasons for doing this). I do know that the trigger for BP's hostility directly towards FL is because of a mistake on FL's part!
I love the idea of morals being questioned! It is so interesting to see how writers can stretch and break their characters when a stressful situation happens. I mean currently I know that BP does this in order to feel safe in knowing they can look after one another, but perhaps something happens where BP then needs those supplies and FL would be almost cruel to deny them it?? But also the morals of individuals being questioned. People who wouldn't hurt a fly now being thrust into conflict, people who wouldn't harm a woman know having to do so to protect their own? The options are limitless.
Also, currently FL wants to stop BP as BP's actions directly impact FL! FL is the closest large group to BP so the victims of BP's crimes come to FL seeking help or stealing in order to survive, and it's draining FL's own supplies! It would be really interesting thinking of something FL could also gain out of winning?
I really like that though and I agree! Sometimes it's far more realistic when both parties essentially lose. Fights like these are not so clear cut; there rarely is an apparent winner and loser as everyone loses enough to be deemed losers ya know? it would be mad depressing if both groups were worse off after the fight.
I really love those ideas though fr!
@Everyone So, I'm thinking we should get the ball rolling with this plot sooner rather than later. It's a long term plot so we can develop along the way once we've got a feel for it! Tomorrow, I will write up a quick summary of what we've discussed so far so that we can see whether people think that it's a plot that they're happy with! I'll be posting the summary here so... Keep your eyes peeled for it.
And, after what Hoot pointed out, I think in the meantime it would be interesting to hear feedback from you guys:
Who should win? FL? BP? Or should it be not so clear who won?
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