01-27-2018, 08:10 PM
(This post was last modified: 01-31-2018, 06:59 PM by Arielle.)
[align=center][div style="width:500px;text-align:justify;font-size:12px;margin-top:10px;color:#000;line-height:120%"]It seems as though I'll have to go back and fix all the chapters and correct the characters that were replaced. I'm...not terribly frustrated though; it really shouldn't take too long. They're very simple fixes.
Note to self: ‘ (—) and – (–) and ç (ç) and ’ (') and é (é)
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Time to ask: did you get a grip on the truth? We are here to bring change to our world. Take a side, make it right—or get out of our way right now; you cannot stop us!
How many times did you look away when someone cried for help?—acting like you didn't know. We won't accept excuses without sincere actions; unmasking all you traitors!
your writing is as always so amazing and at times while reading this i laughed so hard i choked,,
the way you write all the interactions and dynamics between the characters!! is so engaging? i also really like the small idiosyncrasies you gave each of them and rly yixing is too powerful everything he does ?? breaks me?? his eyes being wide open as he slept peacefully and luhan and kris desperately turning his head away from themselves i WEPT
thank you sm for sharing :'^) my eyes have been blessed :'^) im going 2 crack a rib one day laughing at something from this fic but i won't even be sorry it's That worth it!! to be fair this fic is probably worth around 3+ ribs tbh. thank you!! for writing this to begin with !! i'm not v eloquent when leaving comments but this fic gave and keeps giving me Life and i adore it!!
[align=center][div style="width:500px;text-align:justify;font-size:12px;margin-top:10px;color:#000;line-height:120%"]Oh my god, please don't choke... (°o° 
I...did my best. I think I'm actually better at angst, but I did my best to make this as comedic as possible. cx Tbh, if there's anything I learned during my college years, it's that most people aren't just character tropes. As much as I adore fantasy and all that, I think real/normal people are pretty fascinating too. :^) And yes, that part was fun to write! Yixing's a bit of an oddball, but... well, the thing to keep in mind is that they were all selected for a reason. He may be terribly eccentric, but he knows what he's doing, lol.
It's no trouble, really! Please don't sacrifice your ribs though omg I don't...need your ribs...please keep them. The fic was written at the request of my peers...and I thought'd it be a nice way to reminisce about my college years (okay, I'm not that old...I'm just in my first year of grad school - I'm around the average age of the EXO members in this). Really, it's fun though; I'd hardly consider it a 'chore'. ;^)
Dw, I'm not that eloquent when responding to comments, so you're fine!!
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Time to ask: did you get a grip on the truth? We are here to bring change to our world. Take a side, make it right—or get out of our way right now; you cannot stop us!
How many times did you look away when someone cried for help?—acting like you didn't know. We won't accept excuses without sincere actions; unmasking all you traitors!
[align=center][div style="width:490px;text-align:justify;font-size:10px;margin-top:10px;color:#000;line-height:100%"]Thx for sending this to me. Glad to see you included so many of our heart-to-heart talks in the Interning!AU lmao. You'll find me touched.
This is a track.
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Comment vous dire... La vérité finit toujours par se découvrir. À chaque jour suffit sa peine, chacun trouve chaussure à son pied. Le temps blanchit les têtes sans mûrir la raison.
How do I tell you... the truth shall always be discovered. Each day has enough grief, everyone finds bespoke shoes for their feet. Time whitens heads without ripening reason.
SSHSKSJ LUHAN PLEASE OH MY GO D HE'S A TERRIBLE SALESMAN....
"The day will come, when you have to choose between being an asshole and a better person...!" <- lmao ayumi it's u...ur a grandpa now
when will u post the next chapter for this bc i'm highkey dYING OF ANTICIPATION
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How long has it been? Hope I'm not dreaming, looking good too aren't you? It's time to unwind. Eager to catch your smile — ain't shown it in a while, so set free the mind!
Don't need no words, we'll dance the night away together. Passing hours, embrace the feeling forever. It's all ours till the sunrise signals closure, come on, don't be shy now. Won't you take my hand?
[align=center][div style="width:500px;text-align:justify;font-size:12px;margin-top:10px;color:#000;line-height:120%"]Lol, I thought you'd appreciate it. Glad to know that what I thought was correct. <333
Soon - don't worry! I have the next few chapters written; Ayumi's going to beta them for me when she can, and then they'll go up... I still need to edit all of my old posts though. It's easy to make out everything in spite of all the odd symbols, but it still bothers me. cx
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Time to ask: did you get a grip on the truth? We are here to bring change to our world. Take a side, make it right—or get out of our way right now; you cannot stop us!
How many times did you look away when someone cried for help?—acting like you didn't know. We won't accept excuses without sincere actions; unmasking all you traitors!
[align=center][div style="width:500px;text-align:justify;font-size:12px;margin-top:10px;color:#000;line-height:120%"]I opened this thread and started laughing at the odd symbols from That Incident... maybe I really do write too much. I'm just hoping not to exceed the character limit and break something. Again.
On another note, I'm considering starting a Persona fic. I mostly write EXO things for friends but... I've been slammed with nothing but P5R and old P3 and P4 memes in my chats. It's getting to me... and tbvh I think I'm also just letting it happen. Time to start planning, lol.
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Time to ask: did you get a grip on the truth? We are here to bring change to our world. Take a side, make it right—or get out of our way right now; you cannot stop us!
How many times did you look away when someone cried for help?—acting like you didn't know. We won't accept excuses without sincere actions; unmasking all you traitors!
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wow you too? [sarcasm]gee i wonder why[/sarcasm]
i'm nearly done with my fes playthrough... then ig i'll end myself by playing the answer and arena at the same time ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
but jfc i forgot how tedious tartarus can be. tartarus makes me want to persona 3 portable myself-
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How long has it been? Hope I'm not dreaming, looking good too aren't you? It's time to unwind. Eager to catch your smile — ain't shown it in a while, so set free the mind!
Don't need no words, we'll dance the night away together. Passing hours, embrace the feeling forever. It's all ours till the sunrise signals closure, come on, don't be shy now. Won't you take my hand?
06-21-2019, 04:35 AM
(This post was last modified: 06-21-2019, 04:39 AM by Arielle.)
[align=center][div style="width:500px;text-align:justify;font-size:12px;margin-top:10px;color:#000;line-height:120%"]Still so much to clean up in here, what with the whole mess with the symbols from a while back.
Also I've been working on that AkiMitsu thing I said I would do, and the outline's completely finished. I was going to do a oneshot, but it looks like it's going to end up being multichapter. Rip original plans. I've already got 10,000+ words and I just started writing last night... @ATLUS @Persona Franchise please release me, holy f-
"I want to Persona 3 Portable myself" GOD, that's a mood.
Edit: ALSO, can I just get out that Mitsuru is so powerful as a woman... I respect her so much, I literally could not respect her any more than I already do, even if I tried. I love how much she and Akihiko respect each other, it's awesome. Also I'm writing Shinji as the "tired, exasperated uncle", so you all know how this is gonna go.
Last thing, I decided to set it after P4A, so you guys can find small P4 references. And P2 references. Along with some P1. I even decided to drop some Catherine references, I hope you guys'll like them. ;^)
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Time to ask: did you get a grip on the truth? We are here to bring change to our world. Take a side, make it right—or get out of our way right now; you cannot stop us!
How many times did you look away when someone cried for help?—acting like you didn't know. We won't accept excuses without sincere actions; unmasking all you traitors!
!!!!!!!!! im crying sdhjksldfjhdj pls share ur work
also i think i'm halfway thru tartarus but hhngh.... HARD MODE IS BRUTAL LMAO WHY DID I CHOOSE THIS
mitsuru can snap my neck and i'd say thanks!! she's the empress arcana for a reason!!!!! but shdjklsdfj whenever she's mentioned i keep thinking about things like:
mitsuru kirijo: i want to thank you all for electing me as your student council president
mitsuru kirijo: some of you might be worried that i'm a member of that one club with “extermination” in the name, the one with the red armbands where we all walk around with guns
mitsuru kirijo: but listen
mitsuru kirijo: don’t even worry about it
AND REFERENCES... u spoil us so much......
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How long has it been? Hope I'm not dreaming, looking good too aren't you? It's time to unwind. Eager to catch your smile — ain't shown it in a while, so set free the mind!
Don't need no words, we'll dance the night away together. Passing hours, embrace the feeling forever. It's all ours till the sunrise signals closure, come on, don't be shy now. Won't you take my hand?
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